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12．假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華．班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學(xué)張明，他一時無法融入新的班集體中，感到很苦惱．請根據(jù)下列要點用英語給他寫封信．信的主要內(nèi)容有：
1．幫他分析原因；
2．給他提出建議；
 3．陳述你幫助他的具體打算．
注意：1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100左右．
Dear Zhang Ming，
I'm sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates．Maybe you are afraid that our classmates will make fun of your accent．
You can manage to overcome these difficulties．To start with，you will be better understood if you learn to speak Mandarin．Besides，comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends．
In our spare time，I'll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties．Also，I'd like to introduce my good friends to you．
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．
Best regards!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是寫給從外地轉(zhuǎn)來的同學(xué)張明的一封信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一幫他分析原因；二給他提出建議；三自己幫助他的具體打算；四表達(dá)希望．
高分句型：
1．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates．句子里I believe是插入語；that 引導(dǎo)表語從句； too…to 表示"太…而不能"．
我相信其中的一個原因是，你可能太害羞了而不能自信的和同學(xué)交流．
2．Besides，comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends．句子里comparing notes with your classmates frequently 是動名詞做主語，表示"經(jīng)常和同學(xué)對筆記"．
此外，經(jīng)常和同學(xué)對筆記是交到新朋友的好方法．

解答 Dear Zhang Ming，
    I'm sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates．【高分句型一】Maybe you are afraid that our classmates will make fun of your accent．（幫他分析原因）
     You can manage to overcome these difficulties．To start with，you will be better understood if you learn to speak Mandarin．Besides，comparing notes with your classmates frequently is a good way for you to make new friends．【高分句型二】（給他提出建議）
    In our spare time，I'll invite you to play basketball or go to some parties．Also，I'd like to introduce my good friends to you．（自己幫助他的具體打算）
    I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．（表達(dá)希望）
   Best regards!
                                                                  Yours，
                                                                 Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類作文都只是給出只言片語的提示，而不是完整的表達(dá)．此時我們就必須在大腦中將各信息點補充完整，適時使用一些短語和句型，以及各種從句． 此時要記住，"有話好好說，有話慢慢 說"，不要想著一蹴而就．我們有這樣的體驗：提綱式書面表達(dá)的寫作中，我們還沒寫幾句，就感覺所有要點都已經(jīng)表達(dá)完了．在寫作中一定注意避免這樣的情況．