Question

【題目】假定你是李華，邢臺將要承辦某一國際大型運動會，現(xiàn)在正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按照要求用英文給組委會寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.個人情況：高中生；

2.個人條件：英語口語好、愛好體育、善于交往、樂于助人、熟悉邢臺；

3.承諾：全心投入，提供最佳服務(wù)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Li Hua. I hear the next International Games will be held in our city, and I’d like to work as a volunteer for the games.

I am a Senior Two student from a key school of Xing Tai. I have such good spoken English that I can communicate fluently with foreigners. Besides, I am a sports fan and on fire for basketball. In my spare time, I always try some voluntary jobs to enrich my extracurricular life. Thankfully, all these experiences help to shape my characters to be out-going, ready to help and easy to get along with. As a Shang Rao local, I will spare no effort to be a good host and make it my responsibility to introduce my hometown to the visitors.

I think I am well fit for serving the Games. If I am allowed to be a volunteer, I promise to fulfill my duty and do my part. Wish a success of the Games!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求假定你是李華，邢臺將要承辦某一國際大型運動會，現(xiàn)在正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按照要求用英文給組委會寫一封申請信。注意申請信的格式和用語�？紤]用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。要點：1.個人情況：高中生；2.個人條件：英語口語好、愛好體育、善于交往、樂于助人、熟悉邢臺；3.承諾：全心投入，提供最佳服務(wù)。這篇文章對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: spoken English英語口語，get along with相處。還使用了賓語從句I hear the next International Games will be held in our city, and I’d like to work as a volunteer for the games.和賓語從句I think I am well fit for serving the Games.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。