Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Fatness is one of the serious problems which has a bad effect on our health . At present, the situation with

teenagers is even worse. These days, a discussion was being carried out in our class as to if the students with

weight problem should lose their weight.

Some students think fatness does harmful to our health, because it is necessary to be on diet and take suitable

exercise to prevent it. Those who are overweight should take measure to lose weight to be healthy. But others

have a different opinion. They say lose weight will be bad for teenagers during their growth.

In my opinion, we middle school students should not pay too much attention on our weight. But if we are

getting too fat, wee should take less exercise and not eat junk food.

Answer 1

【答案】

Fatness is one of the serious problems which has a bad effect on our health . At present, the situation with

have

teenagers is even worse. These days, a discussion was being carried out in our class as to if the students with

is whether

weight problem should lose their weight.

Some students think fatness does harm to our health, because it is necessary to be on ∧ diet and take suitable

so a

exercise to prevent it. Those who are overweight should take measure to lose weight to be healthy. But others

measures

have a different opinion. They say lose weight will be bad for teenagers during their growth.

losing

In my opinion, we middle school students should not pay too much attention on our weight. But if we are

to

getting too fat, wee should take less exercise and not eat junk food.

more

【解析】

【1】第1處：has → have 考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞單復(fù)數(shù)。先行詞是復(fù)數(shù)名詞problems，后面定語(yǔ)從句中謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)與其保持一致，故將has改成have。

【2】第2處：was → is 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)本句中的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)“these days”可知，本句應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，故將was改成is。

【3】第3處：if → whether 考查賓語(yǔ)從句連接詞。介詞as to（關(guān)于）后面的賓語(yǔ)從句用whether(是否)引導(dǎo)，不能用if。故將if改成whether。

【4】第4處：刪掉their 考查固定搭配。lose weight“減肥”，為固定搭配，故刪掉their。

【5】第5處：because → so 考查連詞。逗號(hào)后面結(jié)果，而非原因，故將but改成so。

【6】第6處：diet前面加a 考查冠詞。be on a diet“節(jié)食”，故在diet前面加a。

【7】第7處：measure → measures 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。take measures to do“采取措施做……”，故將measure改成measures。

【8】第8處：lose → losing 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。賓語(yǔ)從句中主語(yǔ)應(yīng)由動(dòng)名詞充當(dāng)，故將lose改成losing。

【9】第9處：on → to 考查介詞。pay attention to“注意”，為固定搭配，故將on改成to。

【10】第10處：less→ more 考查形容詞比較級(jí)。根據(jù)句意可知，我們應(yīng)該多鍛煉，故將less改成more。