【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful sceneries and fresh air. And a few of us picked flowers while go sightseeing. Some even tried to catch the birds they saw. What was worst, many tourists threw rubbish here and there, that may do great harm to wildlife there.

I don’t think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love nature, but develop our responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of the nature, we should spare no effort to protect them. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your wonderfully memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.

【答案】第一處：sceneries→scenery

第二處：And→But

第三處：go→going

第四處：worst→worse

第五處：that→which

第六處：love后加for

第七處：develop→develops

第八處：去掉the

第九處：them→it

第十處： wonderfully→wonderful

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文，講述了上周末作者和一家旅行社去“生態(tài)旅游”的所見所聞及感想。

第一處：考查名詞。句意：一路上我們欣賞美麗的景色、呼吸著新鮮的空氣。scenery表示“風景”時是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，故sceneries改為scenery。

第二處：考查連詞。句意：但我們中的一些人在賞景時采花。前后是轉(zhuǎn)折而非并列關(guān)系，故And改為But。

第三處：考查狀語從句的省略。句意同上，在while引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句中，當從句主語和主句主語一致且含有be的某種形式時可省略從句的主語和be，完整部分應(yīng)該是while we were going sightseeing，本句相當于省略了we were，故go改為going。

第四處：考查形容詞比較級。句意：更糟糕的是，許多游客到處亂扔垃圾，這可能對那里的野生動物造成極大的危害。此處是與前面提到的那種情況的比較，表示“更糟糕的是”，故worst改為worse。

第五處：考查非限定性定語從句。句意同上，此處為非限定性定語從句，關(guān)系詞指代整個主句內(nèi)容并在從句中作主語，that不能引導(dǎo)非限定性定語從句，應(yīng)該用which，故that改為which。

第六處：考查介詞。句意：一個真正的生態(tài)旅游不僅能讓我們表達我們對大自然的熱愛，而且還能培養(yǎng)我們對大自然的責任。express one’s love for sb/sth表示“表達對某人/物的愛”，故在love后加for。

第七處：考查時態(tài)和主謂一致。句意同上，not only…but (also)連接兩個動詞并列在定語從句中作謂語， that指代先行詞a tour在定語從句中作主語，謂語動詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，故develop改為develops。

第八處：考查定冠詞。句意：當我們欣賞自然之美時，我們應(yīng)該不遺余力地保護它。nature表示“自然”時前面不用定冠詞修飾，故去掉the。

第九處：考查代詞。句意同上，此處指代前面的nature，應(yīng)該用單數(shù)，故them改為it。

第十處：考查形容詞。句意：真正的生態(tài)旅游應(yīng)該是這樣的：除了美好的記憶，什么都不要帶走；除了綠水青山，什么都不要留下。修飾名詞memory用形容詞，故wonderfully改為wonderful。

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