Question

【題目】假如你是李明，你的英國(guó)朋友Mike發(fā)郵件告訴你他對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文學(xué)非常感興趣，但是在閱讀時(shí)遇到了很多困難，比如很多漢字不認(rèn)識(shí)，讀不懂文章的意思等等，希望得到你的幫助。請(qǐng)用英文給Mike回郵件。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1.表示理解并給予安慰；2.提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右：

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。信中不能出現(xiàn)本人相關(guān)信息。

3.開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Dear Mike,

I am so glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature.

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Best wishes!

Yours

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I am more than glad to know that you are interested in the traditional Chinese literature. It's never easy to learn Chinese characters and essays. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well so you don’t have to feel upset. Here are some useful tips.

First, turn to the Internet for help when you have an unsolved problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and I’m always here to help you. But the most important is to keep on learning and reading. Only by constant learning and reading can you promote your understanding to the traditional Chinese literature. You are sure to make progress!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇電子郵件，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示理解并給予安慰；2.提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

文章要點(diǎn)齊全，符合要求，語(yǔ)句通順，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well so you don’t have to feel upset.so引導(dǎo)的并列句，同時(shí)使用find +it+形容詞+ to do sth.結(jié)構(gòu)；turn to the Internet for help when you have an unsolved problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters.when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，并包含where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；the most important is to keep on learning and reading.動(dòng)詞不定式做表語(yǔ)；Only by constant learning and reading can you promote your understanding to the traditional Chinese literature.部分倒裝堪稱(chēng)經(jīng)典。