Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你負(fù)責(zé)的英語俱樂部擬在暑假期間組織主題為“Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”急救培訓(xùn)課程。請你用英語寫一則通知，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 時間和地點(diǎn)；

2. 培訓(xùn)內(nèi)容（觀看關(guān)于意外受傷的短片，專家教授急救技能等）；

3. 培訓(xùn)課的意義。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Notice

With the summer vacation approaching, the English club plans to organize a first aid training class, whose theme is “Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”.

As is scheduled, it will be given in the school lecture hall from 4:00p.m. to 5:00p.m. next Wednesday. At the beginning of the class, a short film will be shown, helping us students know what accidental injuries will frequently happen and what harm they will cause. After that, an expert will give a lecture on how to avoid such injuries. Then under his professional guidance, we will learn how to offer first aid to those who get injured. By attending the class, not only will we master some basic and practical first aid skills, but also we will raise our awareness of safety and try to keep away from danger.

The training class will definitely prove to be a useful experience. Those who are interested are welcome to it!

The School English Club

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一則通知。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，1. 時間和地點(diǎn)；2. 培訓(xùn)內(nèi)容（觀看關(guān)于意外受傷的短片，專家教授急救技能等）；

3. 培訓(xùn)課的意義。第二，人稱為第三人稱，兼用第二人稱。第三，時態(tài)為一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，說明這次活動的主題。第二段，活動內(nèi)容。第三段，培訓(xùn)課的意義。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語: the summer vacation ；first aid ；theme ；accidental ； frequently；avoid ；professional ；guidance；master ；awareness ；safety ；definitely；experience 。

第四步：確定較為高級的句子: With the summer vacation approaching, the English club plans to organize a first aid training class, whose theme is “Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”.

whose引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。

第五步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。