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當(dāng)今社會(huì)，有些家長(zhǎng)由于忙于工作無(wú)暇顧及孩子，從而選擇用物質(zhì)的方式獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)孩子在學(xué)習(xí)上的進(jìn)步和成就。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的短文分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因并表達(dá)你的看法。

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In modern times, more and more parents devote their energy to their career due to fierce competition, thus caring less about their children. Many of them choose to reward their children with money for the progress they have made in their studies.

However, I don’t think this is a practical and proper way. Firstly, if the children are always rewarded with money when they get high marks, their attention will focus on money instead of the pleasure of studying. Some of them will stop working hard as soon as they get what they want. Secondly, too much money will spoil the children, for they are too young to make good use of the money. I think a hug and a kiss will work better for children than money.