Question

假設(shè)你是李華，在一個(gè)禮品網(wǎng)站為你的姐姐訂購(gòu)了一份生日禮物。禮物是一個(gè)標(biāo)有姓名、生日及祝福語(yǔ)的有卡通動(dòng)物形象的粉色杯子。收到禮物后你和姐姐都很滿(mǎn)意。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)筆友Johnson發(fā)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1.描述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的禮物； 2.介紹網(wǎng)上支付及配送情況； 3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的看法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)120--150左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

      3.支付寶安全控件 Alipay Security Control

Dear Johnson,

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I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua                                                 

 

Answer 1

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Dear Johnson,

I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the internet three days ago. It is a beautiful pink cup decorated with my sister’s name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It’s so lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I likes it at the first sight.

Besides, I am very satisfied with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safe. And so is the delivery service. I have received the cup within two days. Don’t you think it’s very fast?

I have enjoyed shopping online very much through this experience ,. There is no doubt that more and more people prefer shopping online nowadays .We don’t have to spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good variety of choices on the internet. Agree with me?

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

                                                      Yours sincerely,

                                                            Li Hua

 

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