Question

14．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jim想了解你家鄉(xiāng)文化遺產(chǎn)（heritage）保護(hù)的情況．請(qǐng)你就文化遺產(chǎn)的保護(hù)現(xiàn)狀、存在的問(wèn)題及你的希望給他寫(xiě)一封信．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右：
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
How are things going？I'm glad you are interested in our cultural heritage protection．
Great progress has been made in the past few years．Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一） People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
However，we are faced with greaterchallenges in protecting our culturalrlics nowadays because they have to make way for many new buildings．Even worse，a largenumber of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）
I think more steps should be taken to protect our cultural heritage．And I hopethe whole society will take an active part．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于開(kāi)放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的美國(guó)朋友Jim想了解你家鄉(xiāng)文化遺產(chǎn)（heritage）保護(hù)的情況．請(qǐng)你就文化遺產(chǎn)的保護(hù)現(xiàn)狀、存在的問(wèn)題及你的希望給他寫(xiě)一封信，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息2、要在適當(dāng)?shù)姆秶鷥?nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣；make progress取得進(jìn)步；cultural heritage文化遺產(chǎn)；however然而；even worse更糟的是；take an active part積極參加
Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一）
People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
Even worse，a large number of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jim，
        How are things going？I'm glad you are interested in our cultural heritage protection．
        Great progress has been made in the past few years．Every year a lot of efforts are made and much money is spent researching and protecting it．（高分句型一） People are more aware of the importance of protecting the cultural heritage．（高分句型二）
        However，we are faced with greater challenges in protecting our cultural rlics nowadays because they have to make way for many new buildings．Even worse，a large number of historic spots have already been destroyed，which worries us a lot．（高分句型三）
        I think more steps should be taken to protect our cultural heritage．And I hope the whole society will take an active part．
                                                                                                                                                                              Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．