Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob在英語學習上給了你很多幫助。他上周發(fā)來電子郵件，詢問你現(xiàn)在的英語學習情況。請你用英文給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：

1. 感謝幫助；

2. 英語學習的進步；

3. 目前面臨的問題。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Bob,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bob,

How’s everything? It’s great to hear from you, and many thanks for what you have done for my English studies.

You gave me much advice on how to improve my listening and writing skills, which helped me a lot. I practice every day, thus making rapid progress. To my great joy, I won the first prize in the English Writing Competition held last month in our school. However, I remain a bit weak in reading. I don’t think I have enough ability to understand long sentences and sometimes I do not seem to grasp the depth and content beyond the words. Would you mind giving me more help?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件給Bob。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

人稱：以第一、第二人稱為主

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時

結構：總分總法

要求：1. 感謝幫助；

2. 英語學習的進步；

3. 目前面臨的問題。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

hear from；English studies；listening and writing skills；make rapid progress；to one’s great joy；the first prize；English Writing Competition；enough；grasp；depth；look forward to等

第三步：連詞成句

1. It’s great to hear from you, and many thanks for what you have done for my English studies.

2. You gave me much advice on how to improve my listening and writing skills, which helped me a lot.

3. I practice every day, thus making rapid progress.

4. I won the first prize in the English Writing Competition held last month in our school.

5. I don’t think I have enough ability to understand long sentences and sometimes I do not seem to grasp the depth and content beyond the words.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表并列補充關系：and

2.表轉折對比關系：However

3.表因果關系：thus

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改