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5．最近，你校學生就是否應該舉辦各種文藝匯演活動進行了討論并分別有不同的看法．請你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一篇短文，介紹相關(guān)情況并發(fā)表自己的觀點．

部分同學贊成	1．可以豐富課余生活，緩解學習壓力； 2．可以加深同學之間的了解，同時培養(yǎng)學生各方面的能力； 3．可以展示自我，贏得尊重．
部分同學反對	1．排練浪費時間，影響學業(yè)； 2．節(jié)目有限，表演人數(shù)少； 3．活動結(jié)束后，產(chǎn)生垃圾多．
你的觀點	…（至少兩點）

注意：
1．文章的開頭已給出，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當發(fā)揮；
2．詞數(shù)：120詞左右（不包括已給開頭）；
3．文中不得提及本人的相關(guān)信息．
4．參考詞匯：緩解relieve（v．）排練rehearse（v．）表演 performance（n．）
Students in our school have held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary to hold parties to celebrate different festivals．Opinions vary from person to person．Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．（高分句型1）Besides，not only does holding activities help them know each other better but it improves their abilities．What's more，some can display themselves and earn respect．（贊成及其原因）
However，some students hold a different view．Firstly，it will take a lot of time to rehearse，which affects their study．Secondly，the list of performance is limited and only a small number of students have the opportunity to take part in it．Thirdly，a lot of waste is produced after the activity，which is harmful to the environment．（反對及其原因）
Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．（高分句型2）At the same time，our classmates may have a really great time by enjoying my performance．（作者的看法及原因）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是篇議論文，要根據(jù)三點要求來完成，分別是 1．引出主題；2．不同同學的看法及其原因：可以豐富課余生活，緩解學習壓力；可以加深同學之間的了解，同時培養(yǎng)學生各方面的能力；可以展示自我，贏得尊重；3．你的觀點及原因．寫作時要注意以下幾點：1、寫作內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點，不可遺漏；2、要注意時態(tài)語態(tài)，避免出現(xiàn)語法和拼寫錯誤；3、適當運用高級詞匯和句型來為自己的文章增色．
【亮點說明】文章要點齊全，表達思路明確，知識點運用恰當?shù)轿�，文中使用了非常好的短語和詞匯為文章增色不少，比如1、熱點話題：a heated discussion  2、釋放學習壓力relieve some study pressure等．還運用了一些從句使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加嚴謹合理，如Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．和 Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．是非限制定語從句，也是一句長句等．

解答 Students in our school have held a heated discussion about whether it is necessary to hold parties to celebrate different festivals．Opinions vary from person to person．（引出主題）
Some students are in favor of the activities，which they think make their after-class life colorful and thus relieve some study pressure．（高分句型1）Besides，not only does holding activities help them know each other better but it improves their abilities．What's more，some can display themselves and earn respect．（贊成及其原因）
However，some students hold a different view．Firstly，it will take a lot of time to rehearse，which affects their study．Secondly，the list of performance is limited and only a small number of students have the opportunity to take part in it．Thirdly，a lot of waste is produced after the activity，which is harmful to the environment．（反對及其原因）
Personally，I think it is good to hold parties，in which I can always enjoy myself and get relaxed．（高分句型2）At the same time，our classmates may have a really great time by enjoying my performance．（作者的看法及原因）

點評 圖表類在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需要積累短語和重要句型．