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【題目】臨近高考，為了幫助高三學(xué)生順利復(fù)習(xí)，在高考中取得好成績(jī)，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART” 專欄。假設(shè)你是該專欄的編輯 James , 收到一封署名為Anxiety的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說(shuō)了自己的焦慮及困擾:近日脾氣暴躁，壓力大，晚上睡不著覺(jué)，白天無(wú)心聽(tīng)課，嚴(yán)重影響了正常的學(xué)習(xí)與生活。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封信。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1．表示理解并給予安慰；

2．提出建議并說(shuō)明理由；

注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；

3．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

Hi Anxiety,

I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment.

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Yours,

James

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Anxiety ,

I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment. In fact, as a senior three student , it is so normal that everyone will have to face the special periods when things seem to be going worse and worse, so you don’t have to worry so much . The most important thing is to learn how to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to relax yourself and regain usual mind. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be beneficial in lifting your spirits.

I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal to achieve your goal.

Yours,

James

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于書信類寫作，根據(jù)提示信息和題目要求來(lái)展開。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)。寫作書信時(shí)一定要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)和層次，提出建議時(shí)要具有說(shuō)服力，對(duì)于一些常用的動(dòng)詞，要注意其其他形式以更為簡(jiǎn)練的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要靈活運(yùn)用各種短語(yǔ)和從句來(lái)豐富文章的內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如 I am sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the crucial moment是that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。In fact, as a senior three student , it is so normal that everyone will have to face the special periods when things seem to be going worse and worse使用了it引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句和when引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合從句。The most important thing is to learn how to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret是so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ) go worse and worse , control your temper, letting your anger out , regain usual mind，be beneficial in lifting your spirits等。插入語(yǔ) First，Second，Last but not least，以及Here are···，I hope···句式的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語(yǔ)言更加連貫。