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20．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Mary想了解一下你將參加的2017年山東省英語夏令營(yíng)（English Summer Camp）的有關(guān)信息．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息給她寫封信，談?wù)動(dòng)嘘P(guān)情況和活動(dòng)的意義，并邀請(qǐng)她參加你們的活動(dòng)．
活動(dòng)地址：山東濟(jì)南
時(shí)間：2017年7月底，共7天
參加人員：來自全國(guó)各地的英語愛好者；中，美，英，澳四國(guó)的英語老師
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：舉行英語演講比賽，交流英語學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，了解各國(guó)的文化，游覽濟(jì)南的名勝．
注意：1．內(nèi)容必須包括以上提供的要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；
2．詞數(shù)，100詞左右．
Dear Mary，
Nice to hear from you again!
As you know，I'm going to take part in a seven-day English Summer Camp to be held in Jinan，Shandong province at the end of July this year．（高分句型一）Many other English lovers from high schools all over the country will go to the camp as well．Some English teachers from China，England，America and Australia will join us．
In the camp，we will have some English speaking competitions，exchange experience in learning English，know more about the culture from different countries，and of course，we will visit some great scenic attractions in Jinan．（高分句型二）
I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I would make some new friends there．（高分句型三）I do hope you will come and join us．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Mary想了解一下你將參加的2017年山東省英語夏令營(yíng)（English Summer Camp）的有關(guān)信息．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列信息給她寫封信，談?wù)動(dòng)嘘P(guān)情況和活動(dòng)的意義，并邀請(qǐng)她參加你們的活動(dòng)，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)地址：山東濟(jì)南
時(shí)間：2017年7月底，共7天
參加人員：來自全國(guó)各地的英語愛好者；中，美，英，澳四國(guó)的英語老師
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：舉行英語演講比賽，交流英語學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，了解各國(guó)的文化，游覽濟(jì)南的名勝．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：As you know眾所周知；take part in參加；as well也；make some new friends 交新的朋友；English speaking competitions英語演講比賽；go to the camp去野營(yíng)；
 As you know，I'm going to take part in a seven-day English Summer Camp to be held in Jinan，Shandong province at the end of July this year．（高分句型一）
In the camp，we will have some English speaking competitions，exchange experience in learning English，know more about the culture from different countries，and of course，we will visit some great scenic attractions in Jinan．（高分句型二）
 I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I would make some new friends there．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mary，
        Nice to hear from you again!
        As you know，I'm going to take part in a seven-day English Summer Camp to be held in Jinan，Shandong province at the end of July this year．（高分句型一）Many other English lovers from high schools all over the country will go to the camp as well．Some English teachers from China，England，America and Australia will join us．
       In the camp，we will have some English speaking competitions，exchange experience in learning English，know more about the culture from different countries，and of course，we will visit some great scenic attractions in Jinan．（高分句型二）
       I think this summer camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I would make some new friends there．（高分句型三）I do hope you will come and join us．
       Best wishes!
                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                             Li  Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．