Question

【題目】假定你是李平，你的美國筆友Tom來信詢問你十一假期是怎樣過的。請你根據(jù)提示信息給他回信，說明你在十一假期中的活動和理由。

1. 學(xué)習(xí)和休息

2. 看望祖父母

3. 和朋友進行一日游

注意：

1.文章開頭已給出，不計入總字數(shù)；

2.字數(shù)100字左右。

Dear Tom,

I’m very glad to receive your letter.

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Yours,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m very glad to receive your letter. And it’s a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the Nation Day holiday.

First, I did my homework. As a senior three student, I’m taking the entrance examination in the near future. So during the holiday, I spent considerable time doing my homework and reviewing what I had learned. I also had a good rest at home because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise. After a short rest, I paid a visit to my grandparents, helping them do some housework and telling them what had happened to me and my friends, which made them very happy and excited .What’s more, I made a one-day trip with my close friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air, from which I benefit a lot, such as friendship, knowledge in biology and so on. What do you think of my holiday, and how about you?

Yours,

Li Ping

【解析】書面表達的解題思路：

1. 確定文章的體裁，本題所要求寫的書面表達是書信，那么首先就需要知曉書信的寫作特點。

2. 確定文章時態(tài)的基調(diào)，確定文章時態(tài)的基調(diào)對于整個寫作非常重要。它直接決定了不同句子使用的時態(tài)正確與否。根據(jù)題目要求可以確定這篇短文應(yīng)該以一般過去時為主。

3. 給文章劃分基本段落，仔細閱讀題目要求和文字提示，領(lǐng)會要寫的文章的主題，確定文章的段落，寫出各段的主題句。本題中的內(nèi)容要點有：①寫信的目的；②介紹在“十一”假期中的活動：休息，看望鄉(xiāng)下的祖父母，和朋友進行一日旅游，并詢問對方的暑假生活。這樣確定文章的基本段落分為兩段或三段。

4. 嘗試用高級詞匯，使可讀性增強。美化句子可以采用復(fù)合句和特殊的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，也可以采用形式主語、形式賓語或簡略句來實現(xiàn)。

5. 連句成篇，在連句成篇的過程中需要注意過渡句和連接詞的使用。

【范文亮點】

文中使用了精彩的連接詞，使短文銜接緊密，如First，After a short rest，What’s more等。

After a short rest, I paid a visit to my grandparents, helping them do some housework and telling them what had happened to me and my friends, which made them very happy and excited.

句意：短暫的休息之后，我拜訪了我的祖父母，幫他們做一些家務(wù)，告訴他們我和我的朋友發(fā)生了什么事，這使他們非常高興和興奮。

helping them do some housework and telling them what had happened to me and my friends是and連接兩個現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨狀語，其中what had happened to me and my friends做tell的賓語從句；which made them very happy and excited.是非限制性定語從句。