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【題目】目前，我國(guó)假期選擇出國(guó)旅游的人越來越多，請(qǐng)你以Travelling Abroad為題，用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)在120左右的短文，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.出境游熱的原因；2.旅游中出現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象，如隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾等；3.你的態(tài)度和看法。

注意：1可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫； 2參考詞匯：樹立形象：uphold an image

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays.

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【答案】One possible version：

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays. The reasons are obvious. With the development of people’s living standard and economy，they can afford to go abroad. Besides, more people are becoming interested in foreign cultures，therefore they are eager to visit different countries for themselves.

However, some people behave very badly in foreign countries. For example, they drop litter everywhere, as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of our country。

It’s well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history. The country’s prosperity enables us to travel abroad. I think we should always bear in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to uphold the image of our motherland while traveling abroad.

【解析】試題分析：本文要求以Travelling Abroad為題，用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)在120左右的短文，要點(diǎn)如下：出境游熱的原因；旅游中出現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象，如隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾等；你的態(tài)度和看法。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

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