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12．請根據(jù)某班QQ群聊天記錄，綜合同學們發(fā)表的意見，為下周的班會寫一篇以"讓我們對吸煙說不"為主題的演講稿．
注意：1．開頭已為你寫好，不計入詞數(shù)
2．詞數(shù)100左右．
3．文章中不能使用真實的人名和地名．

Let's Say No to Smoking
Hello，everyone!Now I'd like to voice myself about smoking．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息某班QQ群聊天記錄，綜合同學們發(fā)表的意見，為下周的班會寫一篇以"讓我們對吸煙說不"為主題的演講稿，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從不同觀點和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be against反對； First首先；Second其次；Third第三；At last最后；result in導致；As we can see眾所周知
People who smoke often develop and even die from different illnesses or diseases．（高分句型一）
Every year，millions of dollars are spent treating diseases caused by smoking．（高分句型二）
At last，smoking causes fire very easily．It's reported that lots of fires that were caused by smoking resulted in great loss．（高分句型三）
 As we can see，smoking does great harm and students should not pick up the bad habit．（高分句型四）

解答 Hello，everyone!Now I'd like to voice myself about smoking．
      I'm strongly against smoking．There are many good reasons for that．
      First，smoking is bad for one's health．People who smoke often develop and even die from different illnesses or diseases．（高分句型一）Second，smoking pollutes the air．People cannot work or study well in a room full of smoke．Third，smoking wastes money．Every year，millions of dollars are spent treating diseases caused by smoking．（高分句型二）At last，smoking causes fire very easily．It's reported that lots of fires that were caused by smoking resulted in great loss．（高分句型三）
      As we can see，smoking does great harm and students should not pick up the bad habit．（高分句型四）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．