Question

【題目】書面表達

假設你是李華，你的筆友Peter給你發(fā)來一封電子郵件，信中講述他和同學發(fā)生了沖突，心情很不好。請你寫一封郵件對他進行勸告。內容必須包含以下三個方面：

1. 介紹和同學產生沖突的不良影響。

2. 分析發(fā)生沖突的主要原因。

3. 談談應如何處理好同學們之間的關系。

注意：1. 詞數：100詞左右；

2．文章的開頭結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數；

3．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail saying that you conflicted with your classmate and is in a bad

mood._______________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.

Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I have received your e-mail saying that you conflicted with your classmate and is in a bad mood. Now I want to say something about it.

Classmate conflicts often result from different attitudes towards some issues. If we fail to deal with these conflicts properly, they can affect our mood and even lead to serious results.

Then what should we do to avoid these conflicts? In my opinion, when this situation arises, we should keep a cool head and put ourselves in others’ shoes rather than get annoyed and lose temper. What’s more, learning the art of compromise can contribute a lot to a good relationship. I think you may try communicating with your classmate to clear up your misunderstanding and you may feel good.

I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語deal with處理；rather than而不是；What’s more而且；I have received your e-mail saying that you conflicted with your classmate and is in a bad mood這個句子運用到非謂語動詞；What’s more, learning the art of compromise can contribute a lot to a good relationship.這個句子運用到非為主動詞做主語；I do hope my suggestions can be of help to you這個句子運用到be of+名詞的結構；