Question

1．春節(jié)是我們的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日．請以"春節(jié)"為話題，用英語寫一篇短文．文章 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．春節(jié)的重要性；
2．離家在外的人們對回家團(tuán)聚的熱情；
3．春節(jié)期間的交通狀況；
4．你對春節(jié)的感受以及你打算怎樣過春節(jié)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
4．文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
As is well-known to everybody，the Spring Festival isChinese New Year，the most important traditional Chinese festival，which isa good chance to strengthen ties between family members and friends，or even business parents．
Early before the festival，people away from home will plan togo home for the festival．However busy or far away from home，they will try toget home for the Reunion dinner．Thus，there are traffic jams everywhere，as so many people are crowding on the way．
Personally，I don't care much about the festival，which isjust a matter of waste．However，I will put aside my books on New Year's Eveand share a big meal with my family．Enjoying the TV entertainment calledChunwan．In the next days I'll concentrate on learning．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，以"春節(jié)"為題，寫一篇有關(guān)我們傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日的短文．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．春節(jié)的重要性； 2．離家在外的人們對回家團(tuán)聚的熱情； 3．春節(jié)期間的交通狀況；4．你對春節(jié)的感受以及你打算怎樣過春節(jié)． 寫作時應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：As is well-known to sb （眾所周知），a good chance to do sth （做某事的好機(jī)會），try to do sth（努力做某事），traffic jams （交通堵塞），care about …（關(guān)心…），put aside sth （把某事放一邊），share sth with sb （與某人分享某物），concentrate on…（集中在…）．

解答 As is well-known to everybody，the Spring Festivalis Chinese New Year，the most important traditional Chinese festival，which isa good chance to strengthen ties between family members and friends，or evenbusiness parents．【高分句型】（春節(jié)的重要性）
Early before the festival，people away from home will plan togo home for the festival．However busy or far away from home，they will try toget home for the Reunion dinner．【高分句型】（離家在外的人們對回家團(tuán)聚的熱情）Thus，there are traffic jams everywhere，as somany people are crowding on the way．（春節(jié)期間的交通狀況）
Personally，I don't care much about the festival，which isjust a matter of waste．However，I will put aside my books on New Year's Eveand share a big meal with my family．Enjoying the TV entertainment calledChunwan．In the next days I'll concentrate on learning．（對春節(jié)的感受以及打算怎樣過春節(jié)）

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．