Question

【題目】隨著人們生活水平的提高，越來越多的家庭擁有了私家車。你們班同學(xué)就此現(xiàn)象展開了一次討論，提出兩種不同的觀點和看法。假如你是趙凱，請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給《學(xué)生雙語》報社寫一封信，客觀介紹這兩種看法。

贊同者認為	反對者認為
1. 方便快捷舒適的 交通工具； 2. 反映出生活水平提高，國家富強； 3. 帶動其它行業(yè)發(fā)展。	1. 廢氣污染嚴重； 2. 影響交通，導(dǎo)致更多事故，危及行人安全； 3. 停車問題日益突出。

注意：1. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。 2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。3. 參考詞匯：危及endanger

范文：

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.

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In short, people should think twice before buying a car.

Yours

Zhao Kai

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether or not it is good for families to own cars.

With the improvement of people’s living conditions, more and more families have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car, as a car provides convenient, fast and comfortable transport. Also, the increase in the number of car owners shows that people are becoming richer, and that the country is becoming stronger. Thirdly, the fact that people buy cars makes other industries develop faster.

However, some other students have a different opinion. They think that cars give off waste gas and make the air polluted. They also said that too many cars would cause traffic jams, lead to more accidents and endanger people’’s lives. Finally, they said that parking is another big problem.

In short, people should think twice before buying a car.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。本作文中給出的要點比較具體，故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語be good for 對……有好處；With the improvement of隨著……的發(fā)展；give off發(fā)出；lead to導(dǎo)致；Also, the increase in the number of car owners shows that people are becoming richer, and that the country is becoming stronger. 等以提升文章的檔次分。本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。這個句子show 有兩個賓語從句，第二個賓語從句的that是不可省略的；In short, people should think twice before buying a car這個句子運用非謂語動詞。