Question

【題目】你堂兄建華在國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí), 你們經(jīng)常用英文通信。他即將完成學(xué)業(yè), 不久前來(lái)信就是否回國(guó)工作征求你的意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示回信：

1．建議他回國(guó)；

2．你的理由是：1）學(xué)有所用, 就業(yè)容易；2）照顧父母。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．行文應(yīng)連貫, 內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整；

3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)與落款已為你寫(xiě)好。

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

Best wishes

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jianhua,

I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I’ve been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think it’s a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for ?

Best wishes.

【解析】

試題分析；本文是一篇書(shū)信體寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、書(shū)信體作文要注意格式嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，注意觀點(diǎn)明確，條理清晰，稱(chēng)呼和結(jié)尾的格式。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。使用了大量短語(yǔ)使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，如In my opinion, For one reason, For another reason, Therefore, ；使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China.是主語(yǔ)從句，能使句子簡(jiǎn)潔明了；So what are you waiting for ?是反問(wèn)句，使文章語(yǔ)氣生動(dòng)活潑。