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9．假設(shè)你是李軍，請(qǐng)你就學(xué)生打車時(shí)如何避免發(fā)生失聯(lián)等安全問題給某英文報(bào)社編輯寫一封信，提供一些建議，內(nèi)容包括：
1．上車前應(yīng)該：①選正規(guī)出租車；②記住車牌號(hào)．
2．上車后應(yīng)該：①坐最安全位置；②不玩手機(jī)，留意行車路線．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120左右；
2．開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)尾語(yǔ)已為你寫好；
3．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
4．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．   
參考詞匯：正規(guī)出租車：licensed．taxi    黑車：unlicensed taxi  車牌號(hào)：plate number
Dear editor，
I am sorry'to learn that some students，especially girls，have been reported to have disconnected or been killed after taking a  taxi．To prevent such happenings，I'd like to offer some suggestions to students in terms of taking a taxi safely．
Firstly，before you get into a taxi，you had better check to see whether it's a licensed taxi or an unlicensed one．It's always safer to take a licensed one，although it might be more expensive．Then，you should look at the plate carefully and try to remember it （ so that the driver can be found out，if anything happens）．Thirdly，sit on the seat behind the driver，which is the safest place in the car．Finally，don't bend your head over your mobile phone all the way but keep your eyes on where the driver is going．If you find something wrong，ask the driver to stop the car immediately．
If everyone follows these rules，they won't be taken in easily by bad drivers．
Yours，
Li Jun
                                                                     
Yours，
Li Jun．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封信，就學(xué)生打車時(shí)間如何避免發(fā)生失聯(lián)等安全問題給某英文報(bào)社編輯提供一些建議．寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．上車前應(yīng)該：①選正規(guī)出租車；②記住車牌號(hào)； 2．上車后應(yīng)該：①坐最安全位置；②不玩手機(jī)，留意行車路線．重要短語(yǔ)：sb be reported to have done （某人被報(bào)道已做某事），would like to do （想要做某事） offer some suggestions （提供一些建議），in terms of （就…而言），had better do sth （最后做某事事），look at the plate （看牌照），try to do sth （努力做某事），bend one's head over one's mobile phone （低頭看手機(jī)），keep one's eyes on （注視，監(jiān)視…），ask sb to do （叫某人做某事），follow these rules （遵循這些原則），be taken in （被欺騙）．
【高分句型】

1．To prevent such happenings，I'd like to offer some suggestions to students in terms of taking a taxi safely．
這里是不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)，I'd like to offer some suggestions to students in terms of taking a taxi safely．為主句．
2．（You）sit on the seat behind the driver，which is the safest place in the car．
這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為（You）sit on the seat behind the driver，先行詞為the seat，which在定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代先行詞the seat．

解答 DearEditor，
I am sorry to learn that somestudents，especially girls，have been reported to have disconnected or beenkilled after taking a taxi．To prevent such happenings，I'd like to offer somesuggestions to students in terms of taking a taxi safely．【高分句型】（開頭---引出話題）
Firstly，before you get intoa taxi，you had better check to see whether it's a licensed taxi or anunlicensed one．It's always safer to take a licensed one，although it might bemore expensive．Then，you should look at the plate carefully and try toremember it （ so that the driver can be found out，if anything happens）．（上車前應(yīng)該：①選正規(guī)出租車；②記住車牌號(hào)）Thirdly，sit on the seat behind the driver，which is the safest place in the car．【高分句型】Finally，don't bend your head over your mobile phone all the way but keep youreyes on where the driver is going．If you find something wrong，ask the driverto stop the car immediately．（上車后應(yīng)該：①坐最安全位置；②不玩手機(jī)，留意行車路線）
If everyone follows theserules，they won't be taken in easily by bad drivers．
Yours，
Li Jun

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．