Question

14．假設(shè)你是李華，你的筆友Tom對(duì)中國(guó)文化非常感興趣，他和他的家人準(zhǔn)備今年來中國(guó)過春節(jié)，寫信向你咨詢相關(guān)事宜．請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，用英語給他回一封電子郵件．內(nèi)容包括：
1．春節(jié)在中國(guó)文化中的重要性；
2．主要的慶�；顒�(dòng)和方式；
3．旅游注意事項(xiàng)：選好參觀的城市、提前預(yù)定賓館等．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Tom，
I'm glad to hear that you and your family are visiting China during the Spring Festival．
                                        
I wish you a pleasant journey in China．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的筆友Tom對(duì)中國(guó)文化非常感興趣，他和他的家人準(zhǔn)備今年來中國(guó)過春節(jié)，寫信向你咨詢相關(guān)事宜．請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，用英語給他回一封電子郵件，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：春節(jié)在中國(guó)文化中的重要性；主要的慶�；顒�(dòng)和方式；旅游注意事項(xiàng)：選好參觀的城市、提前預(yù)定賓館等．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：get together聚在一起；lucky money壓歲錢；express our best wishes表達(dá)祝愿；Chinese culture中國(guó)文化；
 It is an occasion when family members get together and have a good rest．（高分句型一）
Before the festival，we clean our houses and decorate them with red couplets and pictures，which express our best wishes for the coming new year．（高分句型二）
Children are given lucky money in red paper．There are dragon dances and carnivals，from which you can learn more about Chinese culture．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm glad to hear that you and your family are visiting China during the Spring Festival．
       The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China．It is an occasion when family members get together and have a good rest．（高分句型一）Before the festival，we clean our houses and decorate them with red couplets and pictures，which express our best wishes for the coming new year．（高分句型二）During the festival，we visit relatives．Children are given lucky money in red paper．There are dragon dances and carnivals，from which you can learn more about Chinese culture．（高分句型三）In the north of China the special food for the Spring Festival is dumpling．
       Please decide which cities you are going to visit and book the hotel rooms in advance．
       I wish you a pleasant journey in China．
                                                                                                                                                                                                Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．