Question

15．假如你是李華，就讀于一所國際學(xué)校，前段時間你作為中國中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)的一員，參加了世界聾人聯(lián)合會組織的志愿服務(wù)活動，并從中學(xué)到了許多東西，請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英文向該組織寫一封感謝信．
內(nèi)容包括：1．與生活在國際聾人之家的聾人朋友們相處一周；
2．通過演講等方式告訴人們呵護(hù)聾人；
你從中學(xué)到的東西：1．了解了聾人的生活方式；
2．學(xué)會了簡單的手語（sign language），能與他們交流溝通；
3．用實(shí)際行動去愛護(hù)身邊的殘疾人．
注意：1．可參照所給提示，作必要的想象
2．詞數(shù)100左右；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir or Madam，
My name is Li Hua，and I'm from China，I am writing to thank you forgiving me a chance to learn about deaf people．
Last month，as a representative of Chinese middle-school students，I took part in volunteer activities you organized．I lived with deaf people in the International Home for the Deaf for a week．It was the first time that I had been in such close contact with deaf people．We participated in other activities as well，such as giving speeches to tell people to care for deaf people．
Though it was a short time，I learned a lot．I learned about how they live and what they do in their spare time，as well as how they communicate and express themselves．I myself can now use some simple sign language，and I've realized that I'm very lucky to be able to make their lives easier and let them know we care about them．Without you，I would not have known all about this．I promise I will do my part to continue helping them．
Your sincerely．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
We participated in other activities as well，such as giving speeches to tell people to care for deaf people
們參加其他的活動，比如給演講告訴人們關(guān)愛聾啞人．
高分句型二：
I learned about how they live and what they do in their spare time，as well as how they communicate and express themselves．
我學(xué)會了他們?nèi)绾紊�活以及他們在業(yè)余時間做什么，以及他們?nèi)绾螠贤ê捅磉_(dá)自己．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
  My name is Li Hua，and I'm from China．I am writing to thank you for giving me a chance to learn about deaf people．
  Last month，as a representative of Chinese middle-school students，I took part in volunteer activities you organized．I lived with deaf people in the International Home for the Deaf for a week．It was the first time that I had been in such close contact with deaf people．We participated in other activities as well，such as giving speeches to tell people to care for deaf people（高分句型一）．
  Though it was a short time，I learned a lot．I learned about how they live and what they do in their spare time，as well as how they communicate and express themselves（高分句型二）．I myself can now use some simple sign language，and I've realized that I'm very lucky to be able to make their lives easier and let them know we care about them．Without you，I would not have known all about this．I promise I will do my part to continue helping them．
                                                              Your sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．