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5．假定你是李華，要邀請在你校交流的英國學(xué)生Peter到翠湖公園參加英語角活動．請根據(jù)以下圖畫給Peter寫封英文郵件，告訴他路線，并希望他周日上午九點(diǎn)從所住的賓館出發(fā)，到達(dá)公園正門．

（1）．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出．
（2）．可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        
                                                                  Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是看圖作文，根據(jù)所提供的一幅圖和所給要點(diǎn)信息給Peter寫一封英文郵件，告訴他周日上午九點(diǎn)從所住的賓館出發(fā)，到達(dá)公園正門．又屬于提綱作文．
在寫作時人稱用第一人稱和第二人稱．時態(tài)為一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時．
重要短語：invite sb to do sth （邀請某人做某事），attend our English corner （參加英語角），be familiar with （熟悉），go straight along…（徑直沿著…走），turn right （向右轉(zhuǎn)），be expected to do（被期望做某事），arrive at sp（到達(dá)某處），look forward to sth/doing（期望做某事）．
【高分句型】
1．I'm writing to invite you to attend our English corner，which will be held in Cuihu Park this Sunday morning．
這里是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which在從句中作主語，指代前面主句的內(nèi)容．
2．On the opposite is just Cuihu Park．
這里是倒裝句型，介詞短語置于句首，構(gòu)成全部倒裝．即"介詞短語+謂語+主語"．

解答 DearPeter，
I'm writing to invite you to attend ourEnglish corner，which willbe held in Cuihu Park this Sunday morning．【高分句型】Since you're not familiar with our city，I'll show you the way．（目的）
When you come out of your hotel，go straight along the road and turnright on the first corner．You will see a hospital on your left．Then walk along the road towards north，and you can find a restaurant．On the opposite is just Cuihu Park．【高分句型】You are expected to arrive at the maingate before 9 o'clock．I'm sure you can find us easily．（路線）
Looking forward to your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 看圖作文要求將畫面所包含的有效信息用文字表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象．如果是記敘文類的素材，要注意故事的時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．