Question

【題目】寫作。

最近，不少城市發(fā)出了“減少白色污染”的倡議，得到廣大市民的支持。請以“ People should not be encouraged to use plastic bags ”為話題在博客上發(fā)表簡單評論。

注意：詞數(shù)120左右。參考詞匯：可分解的degradable 窒息choke

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Answer 1

【答案】

Plastic bags are very popular in our daily life. People go shopping with plastic bags in free markets, super markets, or departments.

But plastic bags are one of the major pollutants. We can see littered plastic bags thrown everywhere, especially along the railways or highways, in the parks or in the rivers. Because plastics is not degradable, once it is thrown in the environment, it will exist for a long time and pollute soil and water. They are even dangerous to wildlife as thousands of sea animals are killed each year when they eat or are choked by plastic bags. What’s more, “white pollution” creates a bad image for China.

So government should make a law to forbid the use of plastic bags in department stores and supermarkets. Meanwhile, people should be encouraged to replace them with paper bags or cloth bags.

【解析】

該生具有很好的語言表達能力，語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的應(yīng)用基本正確，特別是使用了once和when以及as引導(dǎo)的狀語從句，使用主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)等以及especially，littered，image等高級詞匯的應(yīng)用恰如其分；自然地使用了語句間的連接成分，如：but，meanwhile，what’s more等的使用，使全文流暢結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。