Question

10．寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容
近日，校巴安全已成為了一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題，并得到人們?cè)絹?lái)越多的關(guān)注．你們班同學(xué)就其造成的原因及解決方法進(jìn)行了討論，結(jié)果如下：
主要原因：1．超載  2．超速  3．安全意識(shí)淡�。�
主要解決的方法：1．學(xué)校及幼兒園加強(qiáng)校巴安全檢查2．阻止危險(xiǎn)車(chē)輛上路3．重視安全教育以提高安全意識(shí)．
寫(xiě)作要求
1．以上述信息為材料寫(xiě)一段五句話的短文；
2．句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)流暢、連貫．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 亮點(diǎn)句型一：Recently the safety of school buses has become a serious problem，which has attracted more and more public attention．最近校車(chē)的安全問(wèn)題已成為一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題．此句中which引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代前面整個(gè)句子的意思．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：Finally，we all think that only when all people pay great attention to safety education and only when we all raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decrease．最后，我們都認(rèn)為只有當(dāng)所有人都注意教育安全，只有我們提高安全意識(shí)才能減少交通事故．此句中when引導(dǎo)的并列時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句被only修飾，主句要用部分倒裝，所以can被提前．

解答 Recently the safety of school buses has become a serious problem，which has attracted more and more public attention．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）So in our class we have held a heated discussion on the causes and solutions．After the discussion，we find that the problem is mainly caused by overloading，overspeeding and weak （lack of）safety awareness．【闡明問(wèn)題】As for the solutions，we all think that schools and kindergartens should be required to examine the safety of the school buses．Besides，schools and kindergartens should try to stop risky buses from being operated．Finally，we all think that only when all people pay great attention to safety education and only when we all raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decrease（亮點(diǎn)句型二）．【解決問(wèn)題】

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