【題目】“雙十一”現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)成為購(gòu)物的節(jié)日，在這天，人們紛紛在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物，尋找自己喜愛(ài)的商品。以下是關(guān)于“雙十一”來(lái)源和發(fā)展，請(qǐng)就此寫(xiě)一篇短文。

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

參考詞匯：光棍節(jié)：SinglesDay電子商務(wù)：E-commerce

【寫(xiě)作要求】

1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

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【答案】Double 11，originating from some universities in Nanjing in the 1990s，is called Singles Day in China because it falls on Nov．11by coincidence when many young people will hold many parties to look for the one they love．Since 2011，Double 11 has become the symbol of E-commerce，when people can buy lots of things they like at a low price．But，at the same time ，people might buy some products they don’t need at all or buy something with a high price but in low quality．What’s worse，there are always lots of complaints and they may therefore get annoyed for this．In my opinion，though shopping online on that day brings consumers a lot of convenience，they should be reasonable and buy in the shop with a good reputation in case of being cheated．

【解析】本文是一篇提綱作文，要求以所給的提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。根據(jù)提示的信息可知，文章應(yīng)寫(xiě)成記敘文，文章用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。寫(xiě)作時(shí)要充分發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)?shù)奶砑幼约旱挠^點(diǎn)，使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，并達(dá)到要求的字?jǐn)?shù)。此外，為了提高文章檔次，還要注意使用多種句式和高級(jí)詞匯，并添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢。

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)格式規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言流暢。五個(gè)句子涵蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)，符合題目的要求。本文的亮點(diǎn)是運(yùn)用了復(fù)雜的句式如定語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)等，提升了文章的檔次；現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)、what'smore、incaseof．等結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用也為文章增添了亮色。

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