Question

6．假設(shè)你是張華，現(xiàn)就讀于Toronto大學(xué)．請就你的室友Tom的不文明表現(xiàn)寫信給好友David求助．
 1．不講衛(wèi)生（sanitation）；
 2．休息時間大聲播放音樂；
 3．隨意動用他人物品；
 4．常帶朋友喝酒喧鬧．
注意：1）信的開頭已給出；
2）字?jǐn)?shù)：120-150詞左右．

Answer 1

分析 考查了提綱類作文的寫作，文章的話題是關(guān)于室友的不文明表現(xiàn)，要點都已經(jīng)給了出來，只需要翻譯成英文即可，在寫作時注意使用合適的連接詞把各要點聯(lián)系在一起，同時注意使用高級的詞匯和句型如倒裝句，強調(diào)句，省略句等形式讓句子充滿變化．
He pays no attention to the room sanitation，and often leaves his things about．（高分句型）pay attention to 關(guān)注
What's worse，he often brings his friends here to drink，talking and laughing loudly．（高分句型）What's worse，更糟的是，

解答 One possible version：
Dear David，
I am studying in the Toronto University．Now I have some problems with my room-mate，Tom，and I am writing to ask you for help．Tom is basically a good guy．But he doesn't care much about some of his behaviors．He pays no attention to the room sanitation，and often leaves his things about．（高分句型） He plays very loud music during the rest time．At times，I find him using others daily things without permission．What's worse，he often brings his friends here to drink，talking and laughing loudly．（高分句型） I have been trying to ask him not to do that，but he doesn't listen to me．What shall I do？Would you be so kind as to give me some advice？Best wishes!
Yours，
Zhang Hua

點評 本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果