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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I was young, I lived in the countryside. At that time, the trees there were very green, that left a deep impression on me and the water there was so much clear that I even could see the fish swimming. When it gets dark, the air was cooler than it in the daytime. People liked to walk out their houses to chat together. I liked to play games with my friends but ran along the village happily. As the moon rose highly in the sky, the village was lighting. When I looked up, I could see the moon and a few star. They were so close to me. It seemed that I could touch them. The life in the countryside were so wonderful.

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【解析】考查定語從句。which left a deep impression on me是一個非限制性定語從句，that不能引導非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，指代整個主句內(nèi)容，所以that改成which。

考查固定句型。那里的水是那樣清澈，以至于我都能看到水里游著的小魚。So…that太……以至于，是固定句型，所以去掉much。

考查時態(tài)。表示發(fā)生在過去的事情，用一般過去時，所以gets改成got。

考查it 與 that 的區(qū)別。表示同一事物時，用it；表示同類事物時，用 that，所以it改成that。

考查固定短語。人們喜歡走出他們的房子，一起聊天。walk out of走出，是固定短語。

考查連詞。play games with my friends與ran along the village happily是并列關(guān)系，所以but改成and。

考查副詞。當月亮在空中高高地升起。雖然high和highly都是副詞，但是它們的意思不同， high高，highly非常，所以highly改成high。

考查語態(tài)�！按迩f”與“點亮”之間是被動關(guān)系，所以用被動語態(tài)。

考查名詞。我看到一輪月亮和幾顆星星�！皫最w星星”是復數(shù)意義，所以star改成stars。

考查主謂一致。鄉(xiāng)村的生活真好�！班l(xiāng)村的生活”是單數(shù)意義，所以were改成was。