Question

【題目】生活中充滿了選擇，學(xué)會(huì)自主選擇有助于我們的成長。請以“An important choice I have made”為題，用英語寫一篇100～120詞的短文，記述一次對你影響深遠(yuǎn)的選擇。

短文內(nèi)容包括：

1．記述選擇的經(jīng)過；

2．結(jié)合此次經(jīng)歷，簡要說明自主選擇的重要性。

注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

An important choice I have made

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Answer 1

【答案】

An important choice I have made

Life is full of choices，and to live is to choose .It was not until last year when I was asked to decide on arts or science that I came to realize the importance of making choices. My caring parents suggested I go in for science for a promising future career. Having assessed my strengths and weaknesses，I myself，however，was determined to take up arts instead since history and English were what interested me most. For the first time ever，I have followed my heart and enjoyed everything all along.

I pride myself on making the choice on my own，which actually brings me a sense of

fulfillment and dignity. Definitely，it's also a milestone moment for me to think for myself and learn to be responsible for my own future.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)，本文可分兩段來寫：第一段講述關(guān)于自己選擇的一件事；第二段結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷說明自主選擇的重要性。寫作時(shí)可結(jié)合自身實(shí)際經(jīng)驗(yàn)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文是一篇英語短文，共兩段。內(nèi)容齊全，層次分明，語句通順，布局合理，文中使用高級句子。It was not until last year when I was asked to decide on arts or science that I came to realize the importance of making choices. not until的強(qiáng)調(diào)句式堪稱經(jīng)典；My caring parents suggested I go in for science for a promising future career. Suggest后面的賓語從句運(yùn)用虛擬語氣（should）+動(dòng)詞原形；Having assessed my strengths and weaknesses，I myself，however，was determined to take up arts instead since history and English were what interested me most.現(xiàn)在分詞作時(shí)間狀語；English were what interested me most what引導(dǎo)表語從句；I pride myself on making the choice on my own，which actually brings me a sense of fulfillment and dignity.非限制性定語從句使用巧妙。