Question

【題目】 中國人出國旅游的不文明行為越來越受到廣泛關(guān)注。請以表格中所列舉的事實為依據(jù)，寫一則英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

不文明行為	你的看法
在公共場所： 隨地吐痰 亂丟垃圾 大聲喧嘩 ……	注意言談舉止 愛護環(huán)境 維護中國人的形象 ……

注意：

1. 文章必須包括表格中的提示內(nèi)容，可以增加細節(jié)使行文連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)100左右；

3. 開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

4. 參考詞匯：亂丟 (垃圾) litter；吐痰 spit；形象 image；聲譽 reputation

As more and more Chinese go traveling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As more and more Chinese go travelling abroad, reports about their bad manners flood in. Many overseas Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere. The poor behaviors of some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. Since China has become an important part of the global village, we really need to understand and respect foreign cultures, so as to get along well when travelling abroad. So before you start your next overseas trip, remember to learn about the culture and people there and mind our behaviors in public places, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes. What’s more, wherever you go you need to protect the environment. Only in this way, can we win respect for ourselves and our country.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的主題是中國游客的不文明現(xiàn)象，本文與時政有關(guān)，關(guān)心時政的同學(xué)比較有話說。對于此類文章，要注意一下幾點：1、文章的大致內(nèi)容表格中已經(jīng)給出了，同學(xué)們要根據(jù)表格中的信息進行潤色，寫出一篇完整的文章；2、注意要增加一些細節(jié)，以及自己的看法；3、注意單詞、詞組、句式的運用來給文章增色。

【亮點說明】在對于諸如此類文章的寫作，要善于使用不同的句型。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達，對于不會表達的意思要學(xué)會替換。文章使用了What’s more,這樣的詞來連接文章。學(xué)生在寫作時也要注意用平時在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達自己的意思，本文運用了embarrassed，poor behaviors，have done great harm to ，become an important part of ，get along well，improve China's image等短語和詞匯。本文也有很多句型值得學(xué)習(xí)，如so as to get along well when travelling abroad.狀語從句，which aims to improve China's image in foreigners' eyes.定語從句，Only in this way, can we win respect for ourselves and our country.倒裝句，這樣文章才能寫出新意。