Question

6．最近你班就高三學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該組織集體春游進行了討論．以下是討論的情況．請你用英語寫一篇短文，反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，然后發(fā)表在你校英語論壇上．

贊成（62%）的理由	反對（38%）的理由
1．親近大自然，拓寬視野； 2．增強溝通、合作能力； 3．結(jié)交新朋友．	1．占用寶貴的學(xué)習時間； 2．安全很難保證．

注意：詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）．
Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．They take different attitudes towards it．
62% of the students say yes．In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．（高分句型一）Furthermore，it gives more opportunities to make new friends．However，38% of the students hold the opposite opinion．They think that they are supposed to concentrate their energies on studying，because the university entrance examinations are around the corner．The outing is a waste of time．Meanwhile，they can't prepare for every emergency．
As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．（高分句型二）On the whole，I am in favour of the former．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息針對用英語寫一篇短文，反映討論結(jié)果并談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，然后發(fā)表在你校英語論壇上，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從不同觀點和理由兩個方面來討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：not only，but also 不僅，而且； get close to靠近，接近；Furthermore而且；However然而；are supposed to應(yīng)該；Meanwhile同時；As for至于，關(guān)于On the whole總的來說
In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．（高分句型一）
As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．（高分句型二）

解答 Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．They take different attitudes towards it．
      62% of the students say yes．In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．（高分句型一）Furthermore，it gives more opportunities to make new friends．However，38% of the students hold the opposite opinion．They think that they are supposed to concentrate their energies on studying，because the university entrance examinations are around the corner．The outing is a waste of time．Meanwhile，they can't prepare for every emergency．
      As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．（高分句型二）On the whole，I am in favour of the former．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．