Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每旬中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)灞字符號(hào)(A)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉，

修改：在惜的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意： 1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞 2、只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I'm from Detroit in the United States, and during his senior year in high school I win a scholarship to study the singing during the summer in London. When I went there, I stayed in someone's home. The people were very sweetly, and it was a really fun summer. I got the inside view of that it's like to live there. I loved it, but I have to say, one thing that surprising me was that you had to go to such many different stores to do your shopping. There are also a lot of differences in the language. They said thing like ”ring you up” instead of “give you a call." It took me a little while figure out these differences， because it was fun.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】his → my

【2】去掉study的the

【3】win → won

【4】sweetly → sweet

【5】that → what

【6】surprising → surprised

【7】such → so

【8】thing → things

【9】while后加to

【10】because → but

【解析】

試題分析：通過(guò)閱讀并修改此短文，考查學(xué)生對(duì)固定搭配，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題，以及復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)的辨別和運(yùn)用。

【1】his → my 考查代詞的一致性。全文說(shuō)的是我，這里也應(yīng)該是用my,說(shuō)明我在上高中時(shí)獲得了一個(gè)獎(jiǎng)學(xué)金。

【2】win → won 考查時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。這里在講述過(guò)去的事，應(yīng)該用謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式won。

【3】去掉study的the 考查冠詞的用法。singing 應(yīng)該是動(dòng)名詞，表泛指，不用the。

【4】sweetly → sweet 考查形容詞的用法。和我在一起的倫敦人都很親切，用形容詞sweet作表語(yǔ)。

【5】that → what 考查賓語(yǔ)從句的關(guān)系詞的用法。這里of后面是賓語(yǔ)從句，在賓語(yǔ)從句中what it's like是固定搭配，意思是：是什么樣子。That只起到連接作用不做句子成分。

【6】surprising → surprised 考查動(dòng)詞的用法。這里that surprising me應(yīng)該做定語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該是surprised，意思是：使人吃驚的是。

【7】such → so 考查副詞的用法。many前面用so。

【8】thing → things 考查名詞的用法。thing是可數(shù)名詞，這里是說(shuō)這類(lèi)事，所以用復(fù)數(shù)形式things。

【9】while后加to 考查固定搭配的用法。It takes somebody sometime to do something.意思是：做某事花費(fèi)某人多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間。figure out these differences這個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)前要用to。

【10】because → but 考查連詞的用法。句意：雖然我花了一些時(shí)間才知道這些區(qū)別，但是很有趣，前后表轉(zhuǎn)折，所以用but。