分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息社區(qū)委員會請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件,將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動的安排傳達(dá)給住戶,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:說明舉辦此次活動的目的;時間:下周六上午8:00至11:00;內(nèi)容:采摘蘋果;報名:辦公室,下周四下午5:00前;提示:帶帽子、手套;歡迎踴躍參加. 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):The purpose of…的目的是;At the same time同時; join in參加;otherwise否則;
The picking will go on from 8:00 a.m.to 11:00 a.m.next Saturday and welcome all of the people in our community to join in the activity.(高分句型一)
To join in the activity,you should sign your name in the office before 5:00 p.m.next Thursday,which is the deadline!(高分句型二)
It is suggested that all the people who will join in picking apples should wear a hat and a pair of gloves because there will be a lot of leaves or dirty things that will otherwise fall on your head and make your hands dirty.(高分句型三)
解答 Hi,everyone,
We'll hold a meaningful activity-picking apples.The purpose of this activity is intended to help us know our neighbors in a relaxing way.At the same time,we can get refreshed and feel more energetic.The picking will go on from 8:00 a.m.to 11:00 a.m.next Saturday and welcome all of the people in our community to join in the activity.(高分句型一)
To join in the activity,you should sign your name in the office before 5:00 p.m.next Thursday,which is the deadline!(高分句型二)Don't miss it!Attention!It is suggested that all the people who will join in picking apples should wear a hat and a pair of gloves because there will be a lot of leaves or dirty things that will otherwise fall on your head and make your hands dirty.(高分句型三)
Be active,everyone in our community!
The Community Board
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