Question

19．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（╲）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch，I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot，but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch it，big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house，it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened，a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文主要敘述了作者目睹持續(xù)了三個多小時的暴風雨的經(jīng)歷．上個周日，午飯后，我會房間休息，空氣悶熱，突然一陣強風吹進我的房間．桌上的紙穿過窗子飛到空中，我趕緊去追，大的雨點開始落下．當我回到房子，外面的雨下得愈來愈大，然后聽到從房子后面?zhèn)鱽淼囊宦暰揄懀�原來一顆大樹倒下，砸到后屋的屋頂．

解答 Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．
                           the                                         suddenly
After lunch，I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot，butall was quiet．Then a strong
                                                                                                 and
wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some
 
flew out∧the open window．As I ran out to catch it，big drop of rain began to fall．When I come
            of                                                      them        drops                                         came
back into the house，it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound
                                             或改為much
from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened，a big tree had fallen
                                                                               what
down and broke the top of the backroom．
              broken

1．a(chǎn) 改為the 考查冠詞．形容詞最高級前應該用定冠詞the．
2．sudden 改為suddenly 考查副詞．修飾謂語動詞，應該用副詞．
3．but 改為and 考查連詞．前后是并列關系，所以用and．
4．out 后加of 考查介詞搭配．out of the window表示出了窗口，out是副詞，后面應該用介詞of．
5．it改為them 考查人稱代詞．them指代前面的pieces．
6．drop改為drops 考查名稱單復數(shù)．drop表示雨點時是可數(shù)名詞，下雨時，雨點應該用復數(shù)形式．
7．come改為came 考查時態(tài)．本文是敘述過去發(fā)生的事情，所以應該用一般過去時．
8．去掉more，或改為much 考查比較級．比較級前面應該用much修飾．
9．that改為what 考查名詞性從句．本句中含有賓語從句，從句中缺少主語，所以用what．
10．broke改為broken 考查謂語動詞形式．此處的broken不全應該是had broken，前面有had，這里省略了．

點評 改錯題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉化．
做好短文改錯題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對短文有個了解． 2．充分運用語言的基礎知識，從句型結構、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習慣用法出發(fā)，進行分析判斷，盡快找出錯誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語境，從上下文關系中找出表達連接關系或邏輯關系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進關系還是轉折關系，是因果關系還是讓步關系．