Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假如你們學(xué)校英語(yǔ)愛(ài)好者俱樂(lè)部對(duì)“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話(huà)題進(jìn)行討論,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：

部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣	良好的飲食習(xí)慣	個(gè)人看法
不吃早餐 愛(ài)吃零食 偏食 飲食過(guò)度	飲食多樣化 飲食定時(shí)定量	重要性；有助于身體健康

注意：

1. 發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

4. 發(fā)言稿開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

5. 記數(shù)；100 左右

4. 參考詞匯：偏食 be particular about food 零食 snack

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.

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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snakes; some others are particular about food, and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have a healthy diet, which generally includes proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruits as well as main food, Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong figure. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類(lèi)短文。本文要求考生就“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話(huà)題進(jìn)行討論。屬于議論文。要使用第三人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要點(diǎn)如圖所示。提綱類(lèi)短文最忌諱的是按句翻譯,所以考生在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候,要盡量使用多樣化的句式,讓文章富有變化。同時(shí)在敘述要點(diǎn)時(shí)要使用合適的串聯(lián)詞把各要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)在一起。

本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)合理,語(yǔ)言流暢。很好地完成了題干中要求的所有任務(wù),并有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章分成三段,層層推進(jìn)有理有據(jù)。全文時(shí)態(tài)和人稱(chēng)使用準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤,無(wú)中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)思維句式。句式也較為多樣化,各種句式交替使用,讓文章富有變化。

語(yǔ)法方面：定語(yǔ)從句 ...which generally includes proper amounts of fish,meat, vegetables,fruits as well as main food. 倒裝句Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.這些語(yǔ)法知識(shí)運(yùn)用嫻熟,顯示了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)法功底,作文句式變得多樣。

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文注意使用therefore、however、in my opinion等串聯(lián)詞來(lái)銜接句子和段落,使表達(dá)變得更有條理。

短語(yǔ)和搭配方面：范文使用了be particular about；do harm to等短語(yǔ)和搭配,使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)。