Question

8．I came from a family that never liked to waste money，and my parents taught me that living within my budget was the most important thing．
I had a very comfortable childhood，and never felt the need to throw away money on unnecessary things．
But things changed in my twenties，when I found myself in a city with plenty of food and shopping attractions!I burned through my income in the department stores on Saturday mornings，then burned through my credit cards at the night clubs on Saturday nights．Before too long，I was deeply in debt and constantly borrowing more money from my friends．It was during this time that I reflected on my behaviour，and decided that life was a lot more comfortable when you weren；t continually stressed about money．
For me，being thrifty （節(jié)儉）is not about being short on money．It's about being smart with your money so you can enjoy your life to is fullest．I love recycling and getting back to nature，and teaching the kids about eco-friendly and responsible living．
Whether I like it or not，my natural feeling is to find ways to do everything for less．Less money，less time and less stress!
 
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．以30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞就"節(jié)儉"的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
①對你來說，節(jié)儉是什么？
②你認(rèn)為節(jié)儉是否重要？為什么？
③就生活中如何做到節(jié)儉提一些建議．
【寫作要求】
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：thrifty tradition （節(jié)儉傳統(tǒng)），meet with（偶遇），realized the importance of（意識到重要性），make the most of sth（充分利用），beyond one's budget（超出了某人的預(yù)算），tend to do sth （往往會做某事），indulge in（沉溺于），turn off（關(guān)掉），show off （炫耀），spares no effort （不遺余力），impress sb（使某人印象深刻）．
【高分句型一】
1．①being thrifty means valuing money，②making the most of what I have and trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary things．
①此處是"動名詞短語"作主語．
②此處是由兩個現(xiàn)在分詞短語"making the most of what I have"和"trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary things"作伴隨狀語．
【高分句型二】
1．That's why I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than ever before．
此處是由連接副詞"why"引導(dǎo)的表語從句，意為"那是為什么"．
【高分句型三】
3．turning off lights when leaving the room．
此處是時間狀語從句中的省略，完整結(jié)構(gòu)可理解為"when you leave the room"．
【高分句型四】
4．a(chǎn) smart person is not one  ①who always tries to impress others by showing off their wealth，but one ②who spares no effort to save for the future and for others．
①②兩處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為"one"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語．

解答 In the passage，the writer describes how he forgot his family's thrifty tradition and eventually met with financial difficulty．This helped him realized the importance of thriftiness and start to practice thriftiness again．（概括）
To me，being thrifty means valuing money，making the most of what I have and trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary things．【高分句型一】（節(jié)儉是什么）
Thrift is an old and dated concept to many young people．As life has become a lot easier，people tend to indulge in a luxurious lifestyle．That's why I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than ever before．【高分句型二】（為什么節(jié)儉重要）
      Actually，to be thrifty can be really simple．Most of the time，it's simply a matter of being more thoughtful in our everyday life：turning off lights when leaving the room，【高分句型三】not using the air-conditioners unless necessary，bringing our water bottle from home rather than spending on soft drinks，using public transports to avoid needles driving and parking，ordering just enough when eating out，and so forth．To do these might mean doing things others won't do and controlling our desires．But remember，a smart person is not one who always tries to impress others by showing off their wealth，but one who spares no effort to save for the future and for others．【高分句型四】（生活中如何做到節(jié)儉提一些建議）

點評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．