Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，為�？� “英語園地”寫一篇短文，講述你在這個寒假居家自主學(xué)習(xí)的過程。 注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60。

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Answer 1

【答案】I spent an unforgettable winter vacation this year, during which I became an autonomous learner.

At the beginning of the vacation, I made a detailed learning plan. I first listed the learning tasks for the following days and then made plans in great details to ensure that they are practical and feasible. Then I started learning as scheduled. With the learning materials piled on my desk, I was always in high spirit every day. To my delight, I could carry out the plan strictly.

Whenever I met with difficulties, I turned to my teachers and classmates for help through the Internet. Thanks to the convenient video chat app, I could get my problems solved in time, which guaranteed my learning in a right and smooth way. At the end of the vacation, I had a systematic revision of previous lessons, and gained more confidence in weak subjects. My parents also took notice of my progress and gave me a thumb up for my self-discipline.

I had a great sense of accomplishment because my autonomous learning ability was cultivated, which I believe will have a far-reaching influence on me.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生根據(jù)所給的圖畫內(nèi)容為�？�“英語園地”寫一篇短文，講述自己在這個寒假居家自主學(xué)習(xí)的過程。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 定制詳細(xì)的學(xué)習(xí)計劃。（make a detailed learning plan）

2. 介紹學(xué)習(xí)渠道。（introduce the ways of study）

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

at the beginning of; in great details; in high spirit; to my delight; carry out; meet with difficulties; gave me a thumb up for; have a great sense of

第三步：連詞成句

1. I spent an unforgettable winter vacation this year, during which I became an autonomous learner.

2. At the beginning of the vacation, I made a detailed learning plan.

3. I first listed the learning tasks for the following days and then made plans in great details to ensure that they are practical and feasible.

4. Then I started learning as scheduled.

5. With the learning materials piled on my desk, I was always in high spirit every day.

6. To my delight, I could carry out the plan strictly.

7. Whenever I met with difficulties, I turned to my teachers and classmates for help through the Internet.

8. Thanks to the convenient video chat app, I could get my problems solved in time, which guaranteed my learning in a right and smooth way.

9. At the end of the vacation, I had a systematic revision of previous lessons, and gained more confidence in weak subjects.

10. My parents also took notice of my progress and gave me a thumb up for my self-discipline.

11. I had a great sense of accomplishment because my autonomous learning ability was cultivated, which I believe will have a far-reaching influence on me.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

第五步：潤色修改