Question

19．假設你是李夏，你的美國筆友Sam來信關心你參加高考的情況，請根據(jù)以下要點回信告知．
1．考試日期與科目；
2．考試準備情況；
3．考試吋的狀態(tài)；
4．對試題的感受；
5．可能的考試結果．
注意：
1、詞數(shù)120左右；
2、開頭語和結尾語已為你寫好；
3、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
4、文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名和學校名稱．
參考詞匯：高考college entrance examination
Dear  Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Well，I'm now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．
Over the past ten months，we have been busy in preparing for this examination．Besides listening to teachers carefully in class，we often work deep into night．Therefore，I believe I can succeed．
At first，I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and math，I came to realize，were very easy and English is my favorite subject，you know．So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Xia．

Best  wishes!
Yours，
Li  Xia．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給美國筆友寫一封信，告知他你參加高考的情況．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主．
寫作要點：1．考試日期與科目；2．考試準備情況；3．考試時的狀態(tài)；4．對試題的感受；5．可能的考試結果．
重要短語：reform sth（代表），be replaced by（被代替），share sth with sb（與某人分享某物），needless to say （更不用說），according to （根據(jù)），have positive effects on（對…有影響），be of great significance（非常有意義），loss of （損失），keep fit（保持健康），contributes to（促成），broaden one's horizons（拓寬某人的視野），in turn （反過來又），be beneficial to （對…有益）．
【高分句型一】
1．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．
此處是"介詞短語+關系代詞"引導的非限制性定語從句，主句為"We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th"，關系代詞"which"指代主句中的"the exam"．
【高分句型二】
2．So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．此處是由關系代詞"which"引導的定語從句，先行詞為"a good mark"，關系代詞"which"在從句中作主語．

解答 Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern．Well，I'm now taking the once-a-year college entrance examination．We are scheduled to attend the exam on June 7th and 8th，on the first day of which Chinese and math will be tested，the second day geography，history，politics and English．【高分句型一】（考試日期與科目）
Over the past ten months，we have been busy in preparing for this examination．Besides listening to teachers carefully in class，we often work deep into night．（考試準備情況）Therefore，I believe I can succeed．（可能的考試結果）
At first，I felt a little bit nervous but soon I calmed down because Chinese and math，I came to realize，were very easy and English is my favorite subject，you know．（考試吋的狀態(tài)及對試題的感受） So I suppose I can get a good mark which will enable me to enter my ideal college．【高分句型二】（可能的考試結果）
Best wishes!
Yours，
 Li Xia

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．