【題目】假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在該詞下面寫出該加的詞。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

On a storm night, I was alone at home. After finishing my homework, I was about to go to bed. All of sudden, the light went out. Meanwhile, there was a flash of lightning following by thunderstorms. I was so terrified that I ran to my bed but hid me under the blanket. To make matters bad, my parents went to hospital to accompany with my sick grandfather. I felt too frightened because my mind was full of scary thoughts. After some time passed, I fall asleep at last. At breakfast I told my parents that I had seen last night. My parents were also frightened and they promised that they would ever leave me at home alone.

【答案】1.storm→stormy

2.of后加a

3.following→followed

4.but→and

5.me→myself或?qū)?/span>me去掉

6.bad→worse

7.with去掉

8.fall→fell

9.that→what

10.ever→never

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文。主要講述了作者一個(gè)人在家經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)可怕的夜晚。

第一處：考查形容詞。句意：在一個(gè)暴風(fēng)雨的夜晚，我獨(dú)自一人在家。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，stormy是形容詞，意為“暴風(fēng)雨的”，修飾night，而storm是名詞，故將storm改為stormy。

第二處：考查固定短語。句意：突然，燈滅了。根據(jù)句意可知，all of a sudden意為“突然”，故在of后加a。

第三處：考查謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：與此同時(shí)，電閃雷鳴。根據(jù)句意可知，follow和a flash of lightning是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故將following改為followed。

第四處：考查并列連詞。句意：我嚇得跑到床上，把自己藏在毯子下面。根據(jù)句意可知，此處是并列關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將but改為and。

第五處：考查代詞。句意：我嚇得跑到床上，藏在毯子下面。根據(jù)句意可知，當(dāng)賓語人稱和主語人稱一致時(shí)，賓語要用反身代詞，故此處的me應(yīng)該用其反身代詞myself，如hide后不用代詞，此處的語意也很明確，故將me改為myself或?qū)?/span>me去掉。

第六處：考查比較級(jí)。句意：更糟糕的是，我的父母去醫(yī)院陪我生病的爺爺。根據(jù)句意可知，make matters worse意為“讓事情更糟糕的是”，此處是暗含比較級(jí)，故將bad改為worse。

第七處：考查及物動(dòng)詞。根據(jù)句意可知，accompany是及物動(dòng)詞，此處無需用介詞，故將with去掉。

第八處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)語境可知，此處是講述過去的事，故用一般過去時(shí)，故將fall改為fell。

第九處：考查賓語從句連詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，I had seen是從句，其中seen后缺少賓語，而that不作成分，故此處用what引導(dǎo)賓語從句并在從句中做賓語，故將that改為what。

第十處：考查副詞。句意：我的父母也很害怕，他們承諾永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)把我一個(gè)人留在家里。根據(jù)句意可知，ever意為“曾經(jīng)”與題意不符，故用never表示否定含義，故將ever改為never。

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