Question

15．閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要．
Punishing children is a controversial topic．Everybody has different opinions about how to act to correct a child's behavior．Parents，teachers，doctors and specialists such as psychologists，have disagreements about whether it is good for a child's education to punish him or her．
The word"punish"means different things to different people．Punishment can be physical or emotional．Physical punishment is when the parent hits，slaps or spanks the child．
On the other hand，emotional punishment is when the parent，in order to educate the child，doesn't let him or her watch TV，go to play with his or her friends，or do things like that．The parent doesn't teach him or her，but still he or she punishes the child．
Although many surveys and studies have been made about what the correct way is to raise a child，nobody has the answer or the truth．I think it will be very difficult to find the answer or get people to agree．
I think the parents should love their child and give him or her the best education，but at the same time，they should punish the child if he or she deserves it．I think if you love your child，you should be rational when you apply the punishment．It should be reasonable but strict．
The parents'goal is to have in the future a good man or woman in society，so sometimes you should do what is necessary to get your child to behave well．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇短文主要介紹了關(guān)于懲罰孩子的內(nèi)容．在概括短文時(shí)注意要把要點(diǎn)都概括完全，例如人們對(duì)懲罰孩子的看法，懲罰分為生理和心理的，怎樣正確教育孩子，還有作者自己的看法．注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把這些觀點(diǎn)連接起來(lái)，構(gòu)成概要．重要短語(yǔ)：
 As a matter of fact，事實(shí)上
高分句子：
Proper punishment can be instructive and necessary to children if it is reasonable and strict．，本句中含有if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 People have mixed opinions towards punishment to children．（要點(diǎn)1）Punishment can be physical or emotional，but the way they are punished is the key problem．（要點(diǎn)2）As a matter of fact，it is difficult to find the correct way to raise a child．（要點(diǎn)3）Proper punishment can be instructive and necessary to children if it is reasonable and strict．（高分句型）But love and education are the most important for us to make our kids behave well．（要點(diǎn)4）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 概要寫(xiě)作的基礎(chǔ)是理解語(yǔ)篇，而讀懂語(yǔ)篇的基礎(chǔ)是詞匯，尤其是對(duì)關(guān)鍵詞匯的掌握與運(yùn)用．在此基礎(chǔ)上，綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法與句法結(jié)構(gòu)，按照行文邏輯組織語(yǔ)言，形成概要．