【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一個(gè)詞：

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Sam,

I hear that you’ll travel to China next month. Now I’ll tell you anything about it. Beijing is capital city of China. There are so many amazed places we cannot miss. For example, the Great Wall — one of the seven wonder in the world, the Palace Museum and Yuan Ming Yuan. And you may also go to Hua Shan — a dangerously steep mountain. At last I advise you to visit Hu Nan, that is famous for Zhang Jia Jie. In the way, have you ever heard of Mao Zedong, one of the greatest leaders in Chinese history? If you go to Shao Shan, you’ll know many about him. Oh, I must be stop now, but I will get ready for my final exams.

Yours,

Ahfang

【答案】

【1】anything→something

【2】capital前加the

【3】amazed→amazing

【4】we→you

【5】wonder→wonders

【6】that→which

【7】In→By

【8】many→much

【9】去掉be

【10】but→because/for

【解析】

試題分析：通過(guò)閱讀敘述類的短文，考查學(xué)生對(duì)固定搭配，定語(yǔ)從句，比較級(jí)，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題等的掌握。

【1】anything→something 考查不定代詞。anything用于否定句和疑問(wèn)句中，something用于肯定句中，該句為肯定句，所以需用something。

【2】capital前加the 考查冠詞。北京是中國(guó)的首都城市，capital前應(yīng)該加冠詞the，表示特指。

【3】amazed→amazing 考查形容詞。amazed修飾人，amazing修飾物，由place可知，這里修飾物，所以應(yīng)該用amazing。

【4】we→you 考查人稱代詞。本文是書信形式，主要是給寫信的人介紹北京，所以這里指的是“你”肯定不想錯(cuò)過(guò)令人驚訝的場(chǎng)景，所以需將we改為you。

【5】wonder→wonders 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。one of+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以這里需用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【6】that→which 考查非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。that不可引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，需用which引導(dǎo)。

【7】In→By 考查短語(yǔ)。by the way順便說(shuō)一下，為固定短語(yǔ)。

【8】many→much 考查不可數(shù)名詞。know much about sb.對(duì)某人了解很多，這里需用much。

【9】去掉be 考查情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。be動(dòng)詞和實(shí)義動(dòng)詞不能同時(shí)在一個(gè)句子中，所以這里需去掉be動(dòng)詞。

【10】but→because/for 考查連詞。這里的意思是：我必須停下了，因?yàn)槲乙獪?zhǔn)備考試了。這里是因果關(guān)系，所以這里需用because或for表示原因。

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