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4．下表是學(xué)校英語網(wǎng)站的新增部分欄目，網(wǎng)站負責(zé)人Mr．Black就此向同學(xué)們征詢意見．

Today's World

Travel

Celebrity Story

Sports and Health

假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給Mr．Black寫E-mail，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．最喜歡的欄目及理由；
2．你建議還需增加的欄目及理由．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
參考詞匯：欄目-column．
Dear Mr．Black，
I am glad that there will be some new columns in our English website．____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇為提綱類寫作．題目要求寫出你最喜歡的英語網(wǎng)站的新增欄目，以及建議增加的欄目．欄目有，今日世界，旅行觀光，名人故事，運動健康．考生可以選擇自己最有話可寫的方面入手，保證內(nèi)容的豐富性．本篇文章需要分兩段，一段寫最喜歡的欄目及理由、還有一段寫自己的意見或建議．還需要選擇恰當?shù)倪B接詞，使文章更連貫．
重要短語：
have higher expectation to、turn deaf ear to、the latest science and technology、would appreciate it if等等，使得文章語言更加連貫，意思更明確．此外，文章還運用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)，比如
高分句子：
1．From the new column Today's World we can learn what's going on around the world．本句是賓語從句，what's going on around the world作賓語．
2．I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website．本句含有重要句型  I would appreciate it if…，如果…我將不勝感激．

解答 Dear Mr．Black，
      How are you doing？
      I'm glad that there will be some new columns in our English website．Of the four columns，I have higher expectation to Today's World．As you know，today's world is a changing world．We'll become outdated if we turn deaf ear to it．From the new column Today's World we can learn what's going on around the world．（高分句型）It can also enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology．（介紹我最喜歡的欄目以及原因）
      As to suggestion，I would appreciate it if there are some English-learning columns in the website．（高分句型）Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well，but short of learning chances after class．I hope our website can do something about it．（提出建議增加的欄目）
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．