Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一下作文。 文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son if the poor lived, so he could be thankful to his wealth. They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of that would be considered a very poor family. On their return back, the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt. The boy, who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home, replying in a way that shocked his father.

The boy said he wanted to become farmer. He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night star to give them light while her family had only expensive lanterns. His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home. Finally the boy finished by saying, “Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is true rich.”

With this, the boy got up and walked away, leaving his father sat on their comfortable sofa, totally speechless.

Answer 1

【答案】1.if→how

2.to→for

3.that→what

4.去掉back

5.replying→replied

6.become后邊加上a

7.star→stars

8.her→his

9.ture→truly

10.sat→sitting

【解析】本文敘述了一個(gè)富人想讓兒子看看農(nóng)場上的窮人如何生活，目的是讓兒子領(lǐng)悟到他的生活多幸福。于是帶著他在農(nóng)場上住了幾天。當(dāng)他問兒子這次旅行怎么樣。兒子認(rèn)為農(nóng)場上的窮人比他們擁有的東西要多，因?yàn)檗r(nóng)民們擁有大自然里的東西，而他們沒有。

第一處：考查副詞。句意：一個(gè)富人想讓兒子看看農(nóng)場上的窮人如何生活。故將if改為how。

第二處：考查介詞。thankful for“對…表示感謝”，故將to 改為for。

第三處：考查連詞。句意：他們與農(nóng)場里與一個(gè)被認(rèn)為非常貧困的家庭待了幾天。介詞of后引導(dǎo)賓語從句，賓語從句缺少主語，根據(jù)句意只能由what引導(dǎo)，故將that改為what。

第四處：考查動(dòng)詞。return意為“返回”，加back后意思重復(fù)。故去掉back。

第五處：考查謂語動(dòng)詞。該句中replying應(yīng)該作謂語動(dòng)詞，故將replying改為replied。

第六處：考查不定冠詞。句意：他說他想成為一名農(nóng)民。在farmer前加不定冠詞a，表示泛指一位農(nóng)民。

第七處：考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。夜晚的星星不止一顆，應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)，故將star改為stars。

第八處：考查代詞。句意：他羨慕農(nóng)民們夜晚有美麗的星星給他們照明，而他家只有昂貴的燈。故將her改為his。

第九處：考查副詞。修飾形容詞rich應(yīng)使用副詞，故將true改為truly。

第十處：考查動(dòng)名詞。leave sb doing“讓某人一直處于某種狀態(tài)”，故將sat改為sitting。