Question

1．如果你可以隨心所欲地度過(guò)一天，你會(huì)怎么過(guò)？請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇短文，第一段說(shuō)明你會(huì)邀請(qǐng)誰(shuí)和你一起度過(guò)這一天？為什么？第二段描述你會(huì)去哪里？做些什么事？為什么？
注意：
1．邀請(qǐng)的人可以是親朋好友也可以是古令中外的名人；
2．詞數(shù)：100-120 詞．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Living without worrying about the budget is such a wonderful gift for me and I will definitely share the chance with grandmother，who has devoted herself to raising family since the age of eighteen．
高分句型二：
The diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scene will certainly impress her，taking her for a spa and a nice restaurant is also in my mind．
句型一 ①Living without worrying about the budget is such…該句使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)，此時(shí)謂語(yǔ)應(yīng)注意為單數(shù)．
           ②who has devoted herself to raising family since the age of eighteen．該句是一個(gè)由who 作關(guān)系代詞，且who 在句中作主語(yǔ)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，who 替代前面的先行詞my grandmother
句型二 taking her for a spa and a nice restaurant is also in my mind．此處使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)在句中作伴隨狀語(yǔ)．
此外，還使用到了重要的短語(yǔ)：as a result因此    after all 畢竟

解答 Living without worrying about the budget is such a wonderful gift for me and I will definitely share the chance with grandmother，who has devoted herself to raising family since the age of eighteen．（高分句型一）She has taught me somany precious lessons that are never mentioned in my textbooks．Being a green thumb，my grandmother  is fond of gardening．As a result，I will take her to Hangzhou botanic garden．The diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scene will certainly impress her，taking her for a spa and a nice restaurant is also in my mind．（高分句型二）After all，she has suffered for the whole life．I sincerely hope she could lead a relaxed，happy life ever after．

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