分析 本文是一個提綱類的作文,根據(jù)表格提供的內(nèi)容文章可寫成三段或者四段式.第一段描述70%學(xué)生的看法,第二段30%學(xué)生的看法,第三段針對這種現(xiàn)狀表達自己的觀點和看法.要把提綱中的要點信心擴展成一個個完整的句子,然后根據(jù)文章的中心話題和要求,把這些要點連句成文.這是一個書信,用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時表達文章的內(nèi)容.
亮點句型一:I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent.我寫信是想告訴你,關(guān)于大學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該經(jīng)濟獨立的問題進行了熱烈的討論.本句是一個復(fù)雜句,其中there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent是一個賓語從句,做tell的賓語;在這個賓語從句中whether or not university students should be financially independent是介詞over的賓語從句.
亮點句型二:It is well known that opinions are divided on the question.眾所周知,在這個問題上意見有分歧.這是一個主語從句,其中it是形式主語,that opinions are divided on the question 是真正的主語.
亮點句型三:They hold the idea that university students should be financially independent.他們認為大學(xué)生應(yīng)該財政獨立.這是一個同位語從句的句子,被解釋的名詞是idea,that university students should be financially independent是同位語從句.
解答 Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you there is a heated discussion over whether or not university students should be financially independent.(亮點句型一)
It is well known that opinions are divided on the question.70% of the students think that university students don't have to be financially independent.(亮點句型二)In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows:in the first place,trying to make money will affect their studies.Furthermore,in the second place,they think that they can repay their parents in the future by working hard now,so there is no need for students to take part-time jobs to earn money.【70%學(xué)生的看法】
30% of the students,however,differ in their opinion on this matter.They hold the idea that university students should be financially independent.(亮點句型三)From their point of view,on one hand,doing part-time jobs will help one gain working experience and learn more of society.On the other hand,when students find it hard to make money,they won't waste their money any longer.【30%學(xué)生看法】
As far as I am concerned,I partly agree with the opinions above.I think that as grownups,we should not depend on our parents any more.However,if our parents can afford to pay the tuition for us,we should put our studies in the first place.Thank you for reading my letter.【個人觀點】
Yours,
Li Hua.
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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