Question

【題目】假定你是李華，是學校學生會主席。最近你校英語俱樂部將開展的主題為“青少年體重超重問題”的討論會。請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要點如下：

1. 問題出現(xiàn)的原因：愛吃甜食及脂肪含量高的食物，缺乏運動等

2. 從飲食、運動及生活方式等方面提出建議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右（郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear fellow students,

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Thanks for your attention.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow students,

As we know, there are more and more overweight teenagers. The reasons for this are as follows. First of all, most fat teenagers prefer food with too much fat and sugar to a balanced diet. Secondly, some teenagers go to bed and get up very late, and they don’t have a regular schedule. Which is harmful to their health. What’s more, less exercise can also make children overweight.

In my opinion, overweight children should go on a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruit because they are rich in vitamins. I suggest they eat less sweet food which contain much sugar and fat. In addition, it is advisable to take regular exercise. In short, a healthy mind and lifestyle will make a difference.

Thanks for your attention.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文要求根據(jù)英語俱樂部將開展的主題為“青少年體重超重問題”的討論會寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要點包括：1.問題出現(xiàn)的原因：愛吃甜食及脂肪含量高的食物，缺乏運動等2. 從飲食、運動及生活方式等方面提出建議。故既要完成任務(wù)，又要兼顧形式的要求。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章運用了定語從句Which is harmful to their health.和which contain much sugar and fat. 賓語從句they eat less sweet food. a balanced diet, regular schedule, make a difference.等詞匯及As we know, First of all, Secondly, What’s more, In my opinion, In addition等連接詞。