Question

17．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．請按下列要求改正：
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Yesterday I together with my elder brother was a college student went shopping．At the gate of the store，we meet a homeless man，F(xiàn)rank．He said he lost his home in the hurricane but he had no place to have a good sleep．He was begged and trying to get﹩25，so he could get four hours in a cheap hotel where he could sleep without not anyone bothering him．All he had to keep him warmly was a jacket．When my brother came out of the store he had bought the new coat．In my surprise，he walked up to Frank and handed him the new coat．Frank said，"Did you buy this for me？"My brother said no，but he wanted Frank to have them．Frank just stood there holding the coat，almost in tear．

Answer 1

分析 昨天和哥哥去購物時遇到一個無家可歸的人，他說由于颶風失去的房子，所以乞討25美元能住個便宜的旅館，在旅館里能睡一覺．我哥哥到商店里買了一件新大衣送給他，他很感動．

解答 Yesterday I together with my elder brother∧was a college student went shopping．At the gate of the store，we meet a homeless man，F(xiàn)rank．He said he lost his home in the hurricane but he had no place to have a good sleep．He was begged and trying to get $ 25，so he could get four hours in a cheap hotel where he could sleep Without not anyone bothering him．All he had to keep him warmly was a jacket．When my brother came ou of the store he had bought the new coat．In my surprise，he walked up to Frank and handed him the new coat．Frank said，"Did you buy this for me？"My brother said no，but he wanted Frank to have them．Frank just stood there holding the coat，almost in tear．
解析：
1．brother后加 who/that．考查定語從句的關(guān)系詞．代指先行詞  my elder brother做定語從句was a college student的主語，用 who/that．
2．meet---met．考查謂語動詞的時態(tài)．根據(jù)開頭可知本文講述的是過去的事，所以本句的謂語動詞用過去式met．
3．but---and/so．考查連詞．he had no place to have a good sleep表示"他沒地方睡覺"，是上句的結(jié)果，所以用and/so連接兩句．
4．begged---begging．考查謂語動詞的形式．beg和主語He之間是主動關(guān)系，表示"正在進行"，所以用 begging和trying構(gòu)成并列謂語．
5．去掉 not．考查語義一致．本句表示"不受打擾"，而Without表示"沒有"，所以去掉 not．
6．warmly---warm．考查形容詞的用法．做keep him 的補語，表示"讓他保持溫暖"應(yīng)該用形容詞warm．
7．the---a．考查冠詞．第一次提到，表示"一件新的上衣"用a new coat．
8．In---To．考查介詞．to my surprise是固定短語，表示"讓我吃驚的是"．
9．them---it．考查代詞．代指單數(shù)名詞the new coat用it．
10．tear---tears．考查名詞．固定短語in tears表示"流淚的"．

點評 考查短文改錯．
短文改錯時要注意一下幾點：1．快速閱讀，整體把握短文大意．2．重視語境以及上下文的關(guān)系．3．充分運用基礎(chǔ)語言知識找出錯誤所在．