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【題目】假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一場英語才藝表演(talent show)，想邀請你校外籍教師Black先生前來觀看并做評論。請你按照下面內(nèi)容用英語給他寫一封電子郵件。

主題:English — Bridge to the World

時間:3月31日上午8:30—ll:30

地點:體育館

內(nèi)容:每班一個節(jié)目，歌曲、舞蹈、課本劇、故事、演講等形式不限

聯(lián)系人:李華(電話13613856789)

注意：

1. 詞數(shù):100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù));

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯:評論comment;體育館gymnasium;課本劇textbook drama

Dear Mr. Black，

With best wishes,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Black,

Our school is going to hold an English talent show, so I’m writing to invite you to watch and make comments after it.

The talent show, whose theme is “English — Bridge to the World”, will take place in our school gymnasium from 8:30 to 11:30 am on March 31st. Every class is required to put on one performance, in which students can sing songs, dance, act out textbook dramas, tell stories or give speeches. I’m sure we will have a good time enjoying the performances and will be inspired to learn English better.

I’d appreciate it if you could come. I’m looking forward to your early reply. If you have any questions, please contact me at 13613856789.

With best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一場英語才藝表演(talent show)，想邀請你校外籍教師Black先生前來觀看并做評論。請你按照下面內(nèi)容用英語給他寫一封電子郵件。主題:English — Bridge to the World。

時間:3月31日上午8:30—ll:30 地點:體育館。內(nèi)容:每班一個節(jié)目，歌曲、舞蹈、課本劇、故事、演講等形式不限聯(lián)系人:李華(電話13613856789)注意：1. 詞數(shù):100左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù));2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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