Question

假如你是某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，剛剛收到美國筆友Sarah發(fā)來的一封電子郵件，請你用英語給她回復(fù)一封郵件，具體內(nèi)容包括：
1. 學(xué)習(xí)科目、作息時間；
2. 課余活動（運動、閱讀、上網(wǎng)）;
3. 理想大學(xué)及選擇的原因。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右；頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語以為你寫好。
Dear Sarah,
I’m very glad to receive your last e-mail. At your request, I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
___________________________________________________________________________
Best regards,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sarah,
I’m very glad to receive your last e-mail. At your request, I’d like to tell you something about my school life.
This year I am Senior 3, and I have six subjects to learn every day. School hours usually begin at 7 am and end at 8:30 pm. We are making the most of every minute, preparing for the coming college entrance examination. Though time is precious, I try to do some sports or do some reading after class. Sometimes, too, I surf the Internet to update and amuse myself.
It’s been my dream to go to Peking University ever since I went to senior high school because of its strong cultural atmosphere as well as its high academic status.
I’d appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life as well. I’m looking forward to it.
Best regards,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：考查半開放性作文的寫作，本文只是給出了一個大概的要點描述，要求考生自己樹立要點。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化
考點：考查半開放性作文
點評：本文半開放性作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果